The pie charts below show the percentage of five kinds of books sold by a bookseller between 1972 and 2012

The pie charts below show the percentage of five kinds of books sold by a bookseller between 1972 and 2012
The pizza graphs above describe the percentage of five different types of
books
sold by a shop from 1972 to 2012. It shows three charts, one in 1972, the other in 1992, and the
last
in 2012.
Overall
, in 1972 and 1992, there was almost the same distribution of all categories, but in 2012,
books
about
adult
fiction
increased a lot and biographies decreased quite. Analysing the data about 1972, it is possible
to conclude
that three kinds of
books
share the preference of the readers:
adult
fiction
, children's
fiction
, and biography, each one with 20%. The group "others" got 25%. Twenty years later, in 1992, the scenario has changed little.
Adult
fiction
rose to 25%, children's
fiction
rose to 22% and biography dropped to 15%. After more
20
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years, in 2012
adult
fiction
jumped to 45%, kids'
books
increased by only 3%,
whereas
books
about the life stories of people fell to just 8%. Travel
books
and the class "others" complete the pie chart. Both groups achieved the lowest percentage in the
last
period.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words books, adult, fiction with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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