In some countries, there is not enough recycling of waste materials(eg,paper, glass, can). What are the reasons and solutions?

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Certain nations are not processing waste materials like paper, glass, etc. quite often
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recycled waste is beneficial for
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. In order to dive into
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, we have to understand the reasons and solutions which
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essay. First and foremost, changing garbages into recycled products are intended to decrease environmental
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that
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the world like global warming, flood, etc. In order to maintain a livable nation we need to practice enough
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recycling.
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, it costs a lot of money to keep reusable energy.
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, the technical
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and the
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forced the government or the
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high financial
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which can be burdensome for their well-being. Another reason for limited recycling practices is that the
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to maintain the decision makers' fast
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due to
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the fast-paced waste materials that
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by society. If they did it in a slow-paced
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without actually thinking about the
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consequences
just because of the complicated
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the idea of reusable products will just be a utopia.
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, some problems need to be fixed in order to conduct better environmental
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.
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, the government or the institution have to set high fees for the mechanical
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recycling
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process
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. Managing financial problems will give benefits to relocate which sectors
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more pivotal for sustainable development. Another solution for
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decision makers is to build
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environmental policy which can still be relevant for facing
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organizations are forced to solve the real environmental problem of society rather than their own trivial
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administrations. In
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, there are some limited practices that
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processing garbages become complicated like maintaining financial problems of
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and slow-respond of the
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.
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issues can be reduced by managing the costs for reusable practices and setting good administration
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for the government or the organization to solve environmental risks.
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