The two charts below outline the statistically most desirable countries in terms of quality of life and reasons for migration.

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The

pie

chart

illustrated the proportion of surveys carried out on causes of migration, and the bar

chart

shows rankings of different

countries

based on life quality in 2014. In the

pie

chart

, there were given categories

such

as: better lifestyle, work opportunities, study, job offer, adventure, and family. And in the bar

chart

, there are 10

countries

: the UK, Iceland, the Netherlands, Denmark, Switzerland, the USA, Norway, Canada, Sweden, and Australia. It's obvious from the

pie

chart

that work opportunities took place just below the third part of the graph. Just below a quarter was taken for the job offer and family. Moving to other

countries

to study takes 15% of the

pie

chart

. And the percentage of people who were searching for a better life and moved to other

countries

is 9%. The smallest part of the

chart

goes to people who were on an adventure with 3%. In the second

chart

, it's clearly seen that the UK and Iceland, with 7.55, remain in the same ranking. In the Netherlands, the quality of life was almost 7.6; in

this

country, it's rising to 7.65 in Denmark and Switzerland. It's slightly increasing from the USA with 7.85 to Sweden and Australia with almost 8.

Overall

, job-related factors were the most important reason for the relocation of people to other

countries

Furthermore

, Sweden and Australia were ranked as more desirable locations than other

countries

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