The two charts below outline the statistically most desirable countries in terms of quality of life and reasons for migration.

The two charts below outline the statistically most desirable countries in terms of quality of life and reasons for migration.
The
pie
chart
illustrated the proportion of surveys carried out on causes of migration, and the bar
chart
shows rankings of different
countries
based on life quality in 2014. In the
pie
chart
, there were given categories
such
as: better lifestyle, work opportunities, study, job offer, adventure, and family. And in the bar
chart
, there are 10
countries
: the UK, Iceland, the Netherlands, Denmark, Switzerland, the USA, Norway, Canada, Sweden, and Australia. It's obvious from the
pie
chart
that work opportunities took place just below the third part of the graph. Just below a quarter was taken for the job offer and family. Moving to other
countries
to study takes 15% of the
pie
chart
. And the percentage of people who were searching for a better life and moved to other
countries
is 9%. The smallest part of the
chart
goes to people who were on an adventure with 3%. In the second
chart
, it's clearly seen that the UK and Iceland, with 7.55, remain in the same ranking. In the Netherlands, the quality of life was almost 7.6; in
this
country, it's rising to 7.65 in Denmark and Switzerland. It's slightly increasing from the USA with 7.85 to Sweden and Australia with almost 8.
Overall
, job-related factors were the most important reason for the relocation of people to other
countries
.
Furthermore
, Sweden and Australia were ranked as more desirable locations than other
countries
.
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