The map below shows the changes that have taken palce at the waterfront area of a town calles Darwin between 2009 and 2014.
The maps provided above, illustrate the comparisons that have occurred at the waterfront district of a
town
named Darwin over the period of 2009 to 2014.
Overall
, from the information that the maps have given to us, we can find that there were
some development in Change the verb form
was
this
town
with Correct article usage
the construct
construct
Replace the word
construction
some
new buildings Change preposition
of some
such
as a harbour in the east and a university in the west.
Firstly
, a part of industrial
area in the centre of Correct article usage
the industrial
this
town
turned into swimming
pool and the southern part Add an article
the swimming
a swimming
covered
with trees, so the figure of swimming pools increased to 3. Add a missing verb
was covered
Moreover
, the number of inhabitable buildings, which were in the centre, doubled to 6. In addition
, a harbour constructed
Add a missing verb
was constructed
in
Change preposition
apply
the
southeast over the sea with a footpath along the Correct article usage
apply
town
which had
matched Unnecessary verb
apply
east
and west of the city.
Correct article usage
the east
Subsequently
, the footpath which curcled around the lake and industrial region, contained. Furthermore
, school
, convention centre, lake and fishing area Correct article usage
the school
had
remained without any changes.Unnecessary verb
apply
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