The table below gives information about changes in modes of travel in England between 1985 and 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

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modes of t 1985 1 by a person per year by

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between and 2000.

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node of England Used

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as a travel in both the years.

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travel

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In 1985 we can see less distance travelled per person per year in all modes of

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travel

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to that of 2000. In 1985,

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because of fewer developments- they have used

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bus, wal bus, walking,

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in 2000 where they have covered an average of 429, 255, and 55 miles respectively.

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The table below gives information about changes in modes of travel in England between 1985 and 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

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