The table below gives information about changes in modes of travel in England between 1985 and 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

#information #changes #modes #travel #england #summarise #features #comparisons

✨ Do you want to improve your IELTS writing?

The table illustrates

Correct article usage

the

show examples

average distance, in

mile

Fix the agreement mistake

miles

show examples

travalled

Correct your spelling

travelled

various

Change preposition

by various

show examples

modes of t 1985 1 by a person per year by

travelin

Correct your spelling

travelling

travelin'

kagland

Change the capitalization

Kagland

show examples

between and 2000.

Overall

people of

main

Change the article

the main

show examples

node of England Used

car

Fix the agreement mistake

cars

show examples

as a travel in both the years.

While

Manis

have

Change the verb form

has

show examples

been used minimum in

ainimal

Correct your spelling

animal

minimal

usage of myuyale in 2000. 1985P

While

magnifying the table we can see the differences in average distance travelled using various modes of

liavel

Correct your spelling

travel

For

instance

Add a comma

instance,

show examples

In 1985 we can see less distance travelled per person per year in all modes of

travell

Correct your spelling

travel

comparing

Wrong verb form

compared

show examples

to that of 2000. In 1985,

may be

Correct your spelling

maybe

show examples

because of fewer developments- they have used

focal

Correct article usage

the focal

show examples

bus, wal bus, walking,

byeyele

Correct word choice

and byeyele

show examples

then

Replace the word

than

show examples

in 2000 where they have covered an average of 429, 255, and 55 miles respectively.

Submitted by rinchennima77 on Sat Dec 02 2023

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".

▼

Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.

Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.

▼

Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.

▼

Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.

▼

Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.

▼

Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.

▼

4
Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
18
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

0123456789.0505

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

132 words

🚀 Prepare for IELTS writing section today!

Unlimited Task 1 & Task 2 checks
Practice with essays, charts, and letters.
Personalized suggestions & mistake analysis
Spot every mistake and boost your score.
Topic ideas & vocabulary helpers
Expand your ideas and use the right words.
Progress tracking
Watch your writing improve with every practice.

Topic Vocabulary:

passenger kilometres
modes of travel
dominant mode
lifestyle changes
economic factors
public transportation
urbanization
improved services
urban planning
safety concerns
societal attitudes
comparative analysis
transportation policy
public adoption
infrastructure
environmental concerns

What to do next:

Look at other essays:

4.5
band
The pictures show information about average income and spending on food and clothes by an average family in a city in the UK.
The statistics provide information on the money which was earned and was spent on clothes and food by a family living in the UK.
4.5
band
Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
A number of people believe that music gathers people from another cultures and at diverse ages. From my point of view, it is completely true. I strongly believe that the music is universal. I would like to express my thoughts with relevant examples.
7.5
band
The government should close companies that produce toxic waste materials without their own waste treatment facility in order to protect the envirnonment. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Use specific reasons and examples to support your position.
There is an old proverb which states "We do not inherit the land from our ancestors, rather we borrow it from our children". Some people believe the environment should be protected and therefore companies which cannot treat their waste should be closed. I believe this is something to consider and so I agree with this statement. In this essay I will discuss the other solutions, should closure not be a viable option.
4
band
IELTS Task 2 Writing The gap between the rich and the poor is becoming wider; the rich are becoming richer and the poor are even getting poorer. What problems can the situation cause? What can be done to reduce this gap? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words.
From the beginning of the world the wealthy and needy people have been found division. This division has increasingly rapidly and creating problems. The low income is gotten by a lay man and became lower , however, a huge capital is gathered by an affluent and made a privileg man in the eyes of the world. The main issue of not cash flow in the world so the rich people are becoming rich and the poor remains low. This essay will discuss in the following paragraphs.
5
band
People born today can expect to live longer than people in previous generations. What are some of the positive and negative implications of this phenomenon? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Today's generation has tendencies to live quite longer than the prior generation. This essay will explain further the advantages and the disadvantages of this phenomenon. The benefit is the older generation as a medium of intergenerational knowledge sharing to the younger generation. Whilst, it creates an enormous drawback with the government expense to retired generation in the future.

The table below gives information about changes in modes of travel in England between 1985 and 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

The pictures show information about average income and spending on food and clothes by an average family in a city in the UK.

Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

The government should close companies that produce toxic waste materials without their own waste treatment facility in order to protect the envirnonment. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Use specific reasons and examples to support your position.

People born today can expect to live longer than people in previous generations. What are some of the positive and negative implications of this phenomenon? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.