The maps below show the village of Stakeford in 1930 and in 2010 Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The maps below show the village of Stakeford in 1930 and in 2010

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The maps
depicts
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the differences
of
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the
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Stokeford's
village
in 1930 and in 2010.
Overall
, it is clearly visible from the maps that the numerous changes are about to take place after the development of the
village
, including the addition and the reduction of
few
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amenities.
To begin
with, the most prominent change is the number of houses increased significantly at the
center
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of the
village
, spreading from the south to the north
area
. Right at the
center
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of the housing
area
, the shops
shutted
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down and the post office still
remain
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at
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in
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the same position. And
then
, the
gardens
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area
and the large house were turned into a retirement house.
Moreover
, the primary school developed two new
building
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right next to the main building. There used to be farmlands scattered in the
village
area
but
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they have been
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removed.
Similarly
, the river and the bridge still remain in the same
area
, crossing from
southwest
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the southwest
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into the northeast.
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