The graphs show figures relating to hours worked and stress levels amongst professionals in eight groups. Describe the information shown to a university or a college lecture.

The graphs show figures relating to hours worked and stress levels amongst professionals in eight groups.

Describe the information shown to a university or a college lecture.
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The bar graph illustrates the average weekly working
hours
for eight groups of people,
while
the pie chart compares the percentage of developing their stress-related diseases.
Overall
, businessmen, followed by movie producers and doctors, spend the highest average working
hours
in a week.
However
, lecturers experience the maximum level of stress-linked diseases. In terms of working
hours
, businessmen, movie producers and doctors spend
weekly
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a weekly
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average of 70, 60 and 50
hours
, respectively, and their corresponding health problems attributed to stress are 11 per
cent
, 18 per
cent
and 15 per
cent
of the total proportion of these eight professional groups’ stress-induced patients. That means, despite having the highest weekly average working
hours
, businessmen occupy only about one-tenth of the total population of these 8 professional groups who suffer from stress-associated illnesses.
In contrast
,
instead
of working for only an average of 25
hours
a week - the least among all the listed professionals - lecturers suffer from 25
percent
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stress-induced health problems which is the highest share among all these 8 occupation groups’ stress-linked sufferers.
Also
, with 18 and 15 per
cent
, movie producers and doctors, respectively, are the next two major groups of high-stress patients.
On the other hand
, writers and lawyers, with 45 and 35 corresponding average working
hours
a week, suffer from the same level of stress-related health disorders.
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words hours, cent with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • average hours worked
  • stress levels
  • professional groups
  • correlation
  • highest/lowest
  • reported
  • variations
  • data
  • trends
  • patterns
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