The diagrams below show the life cycle of a species of large fish called the salmon. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The diagrams below show the life cycle of a species of large fish called the salmon. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The diagrams below show the life cycle of a species of large fish called the salmon. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
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The diagrams illustrate how the
salmon
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, a large fish species, evolves during its life cycle.
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, a
salmon
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's life cycle consists of three main durations, beginning with laying the
salmon
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eggs in slow-moving parts of the
river
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and ending with living adult salmons in the open sea.
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with, in
slow-moving
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the slow-moving
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river
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, the
salmon
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eggs are placed between small-sized stones near the reeds and
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stage takes approximately five or six months. In the subsequent stage, the eggs turn into fries with less than 8 cm long. Afterwards, they move to a lower
river
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with fast water flowing. After four years of habitation in the lower
river
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, they become larger with a length of 12 to 15 cm and are called smolt. In
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size, they move to the open sea and their life takes about five years there. After the five-year period, salmons rise and become seven times as long as smolts.
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, they return to the upper
river
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to breed and
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cycle continues

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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 80%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words salmon, river with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "move" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • freshwater streams
  • small pebbles
  • reeds
  • alevin
  • yolk sac
  • nourishment
  • fry
  • grow stronger
  • grow larger
  • parr
  • defined markings
  • estuaries
  • smolt
  • adapt to saltwater
  • ocean
  • full size
  • sexual maturity
  • spawn
  • life cycle
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