The diagrams below show the life cycle of a species of large fish called the salmon. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The diagrams below show the life cycle of a species of large fish called the salmon. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
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The diagrams illustrate how the
salmon
, a large fish species, evolves during its life cycle.
Overall
, a
salmon
's life cycle consists of three main durations, beginning with laying the
salmon
eggs in slow-moving parts of the
river
and ending with living adult salmons in the open sea.
To begin
with, in
slow-moving
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river
, the
salmon
eggs are placed between small-sized stones near the reeds and
this
stage takes approximately five or six months. In the subsequent stage, the eggs turn into fries with less than 8 cm long. Afterwards, they move to a lower
river
with fast water flowing. After four years of habitation in the lower
river
, they become larger with a length of 12 to 15 cm and are called smolt. In
this
size, they move to the open sea and their life takes about five years there. After the five-year period, salmons rise and become seven times as long as smolts.
Finally
, they return to the upper
river
to breed and
this
cycle continues
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Vocabulary: Replace the words salmon, river with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "move" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • freshwater streams
  • small pebbles
  • reeds
  • alevin
  • yolk sac
  • nourishment
  • fry
  • grow stronger
  • grow larger
  • parr
  • defined markings
  • estuaries
  • smolt
  • adapt to saltwater
  • ocean
  • full size
  • sexual maturity
  • spawn
  • life cycle
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