The graphs below give information about computer ownership as a percentage of the population between 2002 and 2010, and by level of education for the years 2002 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar charts show the percentage of the population based on computer
ownership
from 2002 to 2010, and the Use synonyms
ownership
by education level in 2022 and 2010. Use synonyms
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, the number of people shown owning a computer experienced an upward trend, Linking Words
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the Linking Words
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measured by level of education did the same.
To commence with, in the inception period, people who owned a computer stood at approximately 59%. The number Use synonyms
then
increased slightly to about 60%. Having the same trend, the percentage saw a gradual rise to roughly 62%, 66%, and 70% in 2006, 2008, and 2010, respectively.
As regards the computer-measured Linking Words
ownership
by the level of education, those with no high school diploma stood at about 15% in 2002 and increased dramatically to just over 40%. Compared to high school graduates, it started at about 37% and increased to almost 70%. Meanwhile, the number of people with incomplete college degrees was about 50% and rose to roughly 80%. Use synonyms
Finally
, bachelor's degree holders and postgraduate qualifications began at 70% and 75% in 2002, and 90% and 95% in 2010.Linking Words
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