The diagram gives information about the process of making carbonated drinks. Summarise the information by selecting and report in the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The illustrated diagram displays the stages of the carbonated drink-making process.
In general, the bubbly beverages manufacturing process consists of five main stages, starting with water cleaning and ending with the packing stage.
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, in factories, raw water goes through a long tube to filter and water softener, where the percolated agua mixes with chemicals. After that step, the accelerated through pump flow is heated in an electrical heater machine, evaporated and the boiling steam goes through the cooling pipe to the carbonation stage. In the next phase, the carbonated fuzzybrew goes to an immense mixing tank, which is connected to its colouring , syrup and flavour containers. After that, Linking Words
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brew filters a second time. In the fourth stage, the liquid is bottled and canned, the almost finished product is labelled and put into boxes in factories. Linking Words
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, the product is delivered to the supermarkets and sold to the users.Linking Words
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