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The bar chart below shows the numbers of men and women attending various evening courses at an adult education centre in the year 2009. The pie chart gives information about the ages of these course participants.

The bar chart below shows the numbers of men and women attending various evening courses at an adult education centre in the year 2009. The pie chart gives information about the ages of these course participants.
Contained in the bar chart is data pertaining to the quantity of both sexes who participated in different evening classes at an educational centre for adults during 2009. The pie chart illustrates data about the age of those learners.
Overall
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, it can be seen that
women
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 participated more than
men
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 in every aspect, with the exception of sculpture.
Additionally
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, the age group of 40 or over took part in evening courses more than the others. Beginning with
people
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 attended in language, the figure for
women
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 outnumbered
men
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 at exactly 40% and 20%, respectively.
Similarly
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, more female participants attended drama about 20%
while
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 males accounted for 10%. With respect to painting, the highest data was
women
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 around 30% and
men
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 stood at 25%.
In contrast
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, more
men
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 participated in the sculpture than
women
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 about 10% and 5%, in that order. Turning to the remaining chart, over 25% of
people
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 in the 40+ age group joined evening courses,
whereas
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people
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 aged from 30 to 39 made up 16%. Below
this
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 level were the 30-39 and
people
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 aged under 20, the figures were 11% or lower.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words women, men, people with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "data" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • attendance
  • participant
  • adult education
  • distribution
  • proportion
  • engaged
  • trend
  • mid-career
  • popularity
  • speculate
  • job-oriented
  • creative courses
  • leisure aspect
  • enroll
  • correlation
  • inclined
  • career-oriented
  • hobby-related
  • literacy
  • technical skills
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