The chart below shows the expenditure on three categories among different age groups of residents in the UK in 2004.

The chart below shows the expenditure on three categories among different age groups of residents in the UK in 2004.
The graph demonstrates the
expenditures
on three categories, namely
food
and
drink
, restaurants and hotels, and entertainment, by various
age
groups of UK residents in 2004.
Overall
, the data indicates that
food
and
drink
expenditures
increase with
age
.
Also
,
food
and
drink
expenses were the highest for the majority of
age
groups, followed by restaurant and hotel expenses and entertainment. Regarding the specific category of
food
and
drink
, those aged 76 and older incurred the highest
expenditures
, approximately 23% of the total amount. The
age
group under 30 had the lowest
expenditures
, accounting for only 6% of total
expenditures
.
On the other hand
, the
age
group under 30 had the highest restaurant and hotel
expenditures
, at 14% of the total,
while
the
age
group 61-75 had the lowest, at 2% of the total.
In contrast
, the percentage of total spending allocated to entertainment was highest for those aged 61 to 75 and lowest for those aged under 30, at 23% and 7% respectively.
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