The map below shows the development of the village of Ryemouth between 1995 and present.
The pictures illustrate how a
village
in Ryemouth changed from 1995 to present
time.
Generally, it is clear from the pictures that the Add an article
the present
village
experienced a significant modernization. Most noticeably, the disappearance of forest park
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shop
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market
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markets
port
and farmland and the appearance of playgrounds Fix the agreement mistake
ports
such
as golf, tennis, and
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restaurant
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restaurants
park
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In detail, the farmland and forest land in the right corner of the Fix the agreement mistake
parks
village
were destroyed to build up the place which serves the demand for playing golf and tennis. Opposing to
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this
huge area, people constructed more houses and the road was expanded. To meet the requirements of customers, the car park was opened next to the only hotel in the area.
It is also
worth mentioning that people in the village
replaced shops by many restaurants and the fish market was cleared away to make room for apartments. One more thing which was
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that
is
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