The chart below gives information about Southand's main exports in 2000, 2020, and future projections for 2025. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The graph demonstrates the amount of Southland's income from exporting 3
products
(International tourism, dairy products
, and meat products
). Data was taken in 2000 and 2023, along with
its projection for 2025.
In general, international tourism has been the most excellent of Southland’s exports whereas
its lowest export is consistently in meat products
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