The chart below show the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities.

The chart below show the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities.
The given bar chart illustrates the outcomes of a survey about citizens’
coffee
and tea purchasing and consuming behaviours in five cities in Australia. In general, residents of nearly all places favour going to a cafe over buying
coffee
, except for people in Adelaide, and buying fresh
coffee
is the least popular in all places. Related to the type of
coffee
, the most famous one is always instant
coffee
. Specifically, the proportions of citizens in Brisbane and Hobart who drink instant
coffee
are the highest, accounting for about 53% and 54%, respectively.
In addition
, residents in Sydney consume the highest amount of fresh
coffee
, which is about 43%.
This
type of
coffee
is the least popular in Brisbane and Adelaide, making up less than 35% in both cities. In terms of the habit of going to a cafe, Melbourne and Hobart possess the highest rates, accounting for about 64% and 63%, respectively.
This
is followed by Sydney with 61% of citizens drinking at the
coffee
shop. The two metropolises with the lowest rate are Brisbane and Adelaide, which each account for roughly 35%.
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