The chart show the percentage of male and female teachers in different types of educational setting in the UK in 2010
The chart gives information about various types of educational
setting
of male and female teachers in Fix the agreement mistake
settings
the
England in 2010.Correct article usage
apply
Overall
, it is seen that Correct article usage
the women
women
teaching Change noun form
women's
percentage
is more
below college level and Correct quantifier usage
apply
men
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men's
percentage
high
after Add a missing verb
is high
college level
education.
In detail,Add a hyphen
college-level
Female
employees Correct article usage
the Female
percentage
is the highest in pre-
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preschool
school
at 98% followed by primary
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the primary
school
at 91% in UK
in 2010.The secondary Correct article usage
the UK
school
percentage
is 50%.While in
private training Correct word choice
In
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institutes
institute
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institute,
women
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women's
percentage
is 43% and in university
ratio Fix the agreement mistake
universities
is
lowest at 24% in Wrong verb form
was
the
Britain in 2010.
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On the other hand
,male
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males
has
the Wrong verb form
had
most
employment ratio in Correct word choice
highest
degree level
institutes at 70% in Add a hyphen
degree-level
the
England in 2010.After universities private institutes stood Correct article usage
apply
at
second place with Change preposition
in
higher
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a higher
percentage
of men
employees at 50% followed by secondary Correct your spelling
male
school
at 43%.The Fix the agreement mistake
schools
least
ratio of male employment in Primary Correct word choice
lowest
school
and nursery school
at 6% and 4% respectively.
However
,college
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colleges
has
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had
equal
number of workers of both Change the article
an equal
the equal
gender
at 50% in Fix the agreement mistake
genders
UK
in 2010.Correct article usage
the UK
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