The maps below show the layout of a university’s sports centre now, and how it will look after redevelopment. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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These are plans
of
the sports complex of a university today and in the future after going through some changes.
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Overall
, the centre will be much bigger than it is today, the space will be put to good use and more infrastructure Linking Words
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expected to be added to serve its users.
Currently, inside the building, there is a reception that leads into a central 25m pool with a changing room on the left side and a row of seats to the right. To the north of the pool, lies a gym for various exercises and outside Correct subject-verb agreement
is
this
main complex, two outdoor courts exist . One to the west and the other to the east.
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to the west of the reception, a sports shop and a changing room will be added Correct word choice
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while
to the east, the space will house a cafe and another changing room in the corner. The gym is expected to be enlarged and two studios are to be included Linking Words
as well as
a sports hall to the east of the recreational centre. What was formerly a court on the west wing will soon become a leisure pool .Linking Words
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