The maps below show the layout of a university’s sports centre now, and how it will look after redevelopment. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps below show the layout of a university’s sports centre now, and how it will look after redevelopment.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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the sports complex of a university today and in the future after going through some changes.
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, the centre will be much bigger than it is today, the space will be put to good use and more infrastructure
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expected to be added to serve its users. Currently, inside the building, there is a reception that leads into a central 25m pool with a changing room on the left side and a row of seats to the right. To the north of the pool, lies a gym for various exercises and outside
this
main complex, two outdoor courts exist . One to the west and the other to the east. In years to come
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to the west of the reception, a sports shop and a changing room will be added
while
to the east, the space will house a cafe and another changing room in the corner. The gym is expected to be enlarged and two studios are to be included
as well as
a sports hall to the east of the recreational centre. What was formerly a court on the west wing will soon become a leisure pool .
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