The charts below show the proportion of the energy produced from different sources in a country between 1985 and 2003.

The charts below show the proportion of the energy produced from different sources in a country between 1985 and 2003.
The picture expresses the
figure
for
oil
, natural gas, coal, hydrogen, nuclear and other renewable in one given country in the given years. In 1985,
oil
accounted for 52% and it was 52 times higher than the
figure
for other renewable. Other renewable only accounted for 1% and it was the lowest. The percentage of nuclear was 22% and it and natural gas had a big gap of 9%. Coal accounted for 8% and it was 2 times higher than hydrogen. In 2003, the percentage of
oil
decreased to 39%.
By contrast
, the
figure
for other renewable increased to 4% but it still was 9 times lower than
oil
. Interestingly, the
figure
for hydrogen was the same. Nuclear accounted for 17% and Natural accounted for 23%. The
figure
for coal increased to 13%. In brief, the
figure
for
oil
was highest between 1985 and 2003.
On the other hand
, the percentage of other renewable was the lowest.
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