The chart shows the results of surveys in one African country asking teenagers the main reasons for using their phones between 2016 and 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
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The pie charts show the primary reasons why youngsters from African regions used their mobile
phones
from 2016 and 2019.
Overall
, the majority of teenagers used their phones
for social networks over all
the given Correct determiner usage
apply
period
, while
the percentage of surveyors who purchased phones
for calls was the least
.
It can be seen that in all years , the main reason for phone usage was social platforms and the percentage of these people was always near 50%, and Correct word choice
lowest
the
Change preposition
in the
last
year
of the given period
it hit the peak with
56%.Back Change preposition
at
to
2016, a mere 15 Change preposition
in
percent
of surveyors used mobile Change the spelling
per cent
phones
because of its
digital camera and the next Correct pronoun usage
their
year
this
fraction remained stable. In following
years Correct article usage
the following
this
trend went upward for 18% and 20% , in 2018 and 2019 respectively.
The number of teens using their mobiles for email decreased throughout the given period
. In
the beginning of the Change the preposition
At
period
, a quarter of them chose it for email , but in 2019, this
trend reduced for
6%, with Change preposition
to
figure
Correct article usage
a figure
19
%.Change preposition
of 19
Therefore
, the proportion of people who use their phones
for calls was fluctuated
, but it was the their least reason Change to the active voice
fluctuated
has fluctuated
of
phone usage Change preposition
for
in
every Change preposition
apply
year
and the
Correct article usage
apply
last
year
it has shown
only 5%.Wrong verb form
showed
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "last".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words phones, period, year with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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