The diagram below shows the process of making carbonated drinks. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The illustration presents an overview of the key stages involved in the manufacture of production carbonated drinks from five main steps namely

water

cleaning , heating evaporation and carbonation, mixing tank, filtering and filling and packing.

Overall

, raw

water

is refined into crude ingredients to produce a usable product. The whole process of carbonated drinks manufacturing starts when wastewater from people’s houses

are

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collected and filtered through a filter machine in order to remove any undesirable dirt in raw

water

.

Following

this

, a chemical is added to the filtered

water

called softener chemicals before pumping

into

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it into

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an electric heater with a high temperature to make

water

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the water

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evaporate. After that, it goes through a cooling pipe to reduce the heat and carbon dioxide is added. Once

this

particular

stage

in the manufacturing process has been completed, the carbonated

water

runs down via a tube to a mixing tank and supplements different chemicals

such

as colouring, syrup and flavour before moving to the next

stage

. After going into three steps, the

water

treatment re-enters a filter machine to remove impurities

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.

Subsequently

, a penultimate

stage

which is filling in cans and bottles is carried out. It

then

leads to the final

stage

of the process where the bottles and cans of

water

are packaged into cartons and delivered to stores.