The maps below show the layout of a university’s sports centre now, and how it will look after redevelopment. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The provided map depicts details about the university's play centre's transformation from the present day until after renovation.

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, it is clear, that the estate will experience a majority of changes over the given period and become suitable for the students.

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, in the present, there is an outdoor courts which will be removed in the future.

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, the reception pathway will be transformed into a bigger place where there will be a café, sports shops and two changing rooms.

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, as can be seen, in the current days the left-hand of the place includes

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an outdoor court but in comparison to the future, it will be turned into a leisure pool.

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, on the opposite side of the play centre, in the top right-hand corner, there will be two dance studios and a business hall which is appropriate for meetings and communicating with others.

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, next to the pool there will be a seating room and another changing room.

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The maps below show the layout of a university’s sports centre now, and how it will look after redevelopment. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

In some countries today, children are taught from a young age that competition is important and that winning is everything. Is this a positive or a negative development?

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Some people think that all university students should study whether they like. Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology. Discuss these views and give your own opinions.

You are not satisfied with a product you purchased. Write a letter to the store manager. In your letter: - Describe the product and the problem. - Explain what you want the store to do. - Say what you will do if the issue is not resolved.

The most important aim of science should be to improve people's lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?