The maps below show the layout of a university’s sports centre now, and how it will look after redevelopment. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The provided map depicts details about the university's play centre's transformation from the present day until after renovation.
Overall
, it is clear, that the estate will experience a majority of changes over the given period and become suitable for the students.
Firstly
, in the present, there is an outdoor courts which will be removed in the future. Following
this
, the reception pathway will be transformed into a bigger place where there will be a café, sports shops and two changing rooms. Furthermore
, as can be seen, in the current days the left-hand of the place includes also
an outdoor court but in comparison to the future, it will be turned into a leisure pool.
Moreover
, on the opposite side of the play centre, in the top right-hand corner, there will be two dance studios and a business hall which is appropriate for meetings and communicating with others. Lastly
, next to the pool there will be a seating room and another changing room.Submitted by palvdori on
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: The word "present" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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