The line graph below shows the changes in the share price of Outokumpu companies in euros between January 2006 and December 2010. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information below.
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The data given presents the information roughly
of
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on
Outokumpu
's stock
price
changes in Euro
from early 2006 to the end of 2010.
Overall
, it is clear that
share
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the share
price
of Outokumpu
companies fluctuated throughout a given period. However
, it is notable that the close price
in stock
market remained un from January 2006 to December 2010.
In the early observation period, Add an article
the stock
Outokumpu
firstly
recorded its share Change the word
first
price
roughly at 12 Euro
. By June 2006, the price
significantly went up almost trippled
approximately at 31 Correct your spelling
tripled
Euro
. Although
the stock
price
went down throughout one-year
period after its significant increase, Correct article usage
a one-year
Outokumpu
's share price
bounced back and noted
for its close Add a missing verb
was noted
price
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of
at
30 Change preposition
apply
Euro
in the
early Correct article usage
apply
of
2008.
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apply
Afterward
, the market condition seemed against Change the spelling
Afterwards
to
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apply
Outokumpu
company and it caused the biggest dropped
they ever recorded, from 30 Wrong verb form
drop
Euro
to roughly 7 Euro
in June 2008. After the worse
trend, the Correct word choice
worst
stock
price
of Outokumpu
started to increase with slight flunctuation
in the process and closed its Correct your spelling
fluctuation
fluctuations
stock
price
at approximately 7 Euro
in December 2010.Submitted by pedrothedawn on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words outokumpu, stock, price, euro with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "roughly" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "significantly" was used 2 times.
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