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The charts give information about honey-bee colonies and honey production in the US

The charts give information about honey-bee colonies and honey production in the US
#information #honey-bee #colonies #honey #production
The charts below give information about the
number
 of
honey
-bee
colonies
 and the
amount
 of
honey
-bee
production
 in the US between 1970 and 2010.
Overall
, the
number
 of
Honey
-bee
colonies
have
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has
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 decreased over 30
years
 from 1980 to 2010,so the
amount
 of
honey
production
 dropped to 70000
tonnes
.From 1970 to 1980, the
number
 of
honey
-bee
colonies
 went up each year till it reached just under 4,5. The
number
 of
honey
-bee
colonies
were
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was
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showed
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shown
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at
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on
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 the left chart. In 1970, the
number
 of
honey
-bee
colonies
 rose until 1980.
However
, the
number
 of
honey
-bee
colonies
have
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apply
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decreased every ten
years
 till it reached just under 2
millions
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million
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 in 2010. The
last
 chart
showed
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shows
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the
amount
 of
honey
production
.In 1970, the
amount
 of
honey
production
were
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was
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 130,000
tonnes
 and
then
 the
amount
 dropped to 110,000
tonnes
 in 1980.
However
, between 1980 and 1990, the
amount
 rose to 120,000
tonnes
 and went up every ten
years
 till it reached just 70,000
tonnes
. In conclusion, both charts show the
number
 of
honey
-bee
colonies
 and the
amount
 of
honey
production
, both of them
are
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have been
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 deceased for 40
years
.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however".
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 86%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, honey-bee, colonies, amount, production, years, honey, tonnes with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "give" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "showed" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 7 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 7 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "went up" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "just under" was used 2 times.
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