The three pie charts below show the changes in annual spending by a particular UK school in 1981,1991 and 2001.

The three pie charts below show the changes in annual spending by a particular UK school in 1981,1991 and 2001.
The pie charts compare the alteration in expenditure of a certain school in the UK in three particular
years
, 1981,1991, and 2001. It can be seen that the main quantity of expenses specialized to teachers during these three
years
. Whilst the insurance had a minor spending. In 1981, the school spent significantly on teachers' salaries at 40%, and in 1991
this
figure rose to 50%
however
it dropped to 45% ten
years
later.
This
pattern was repeated for resources e.g. books which were 15%, 20%, and 9% respectively in 1981,1991, and 2001. Furniture and equipment in 1891 had 15% of expenditure and
then
it declined by a tenth dramatically in 1991 and at
last
it reached just a little under a quarter noticeably. Over these three
years
, the spending on insurance seems to be less important than other factors as it went up gradually from 2% to a little under a tenth.
However
, the resources books budgeting dipped strikingly to almost 9% whilst its expenditure was approximately 3 out of 10 between 1981 and 2001.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • budget allocation
  • educational expenditure
  • financial management
  • infrastructure investment
  • evolution of costs
  • annual spending
  • strategic funding
  • capital outlay
  • operational costs
  • resource allocation
  • fiscal trends
  • cost analysis
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