The diagram illustrate how the layout of school library changed over a period of five years.

The diagram illustrate how the layout of school library changed over a period of five years.
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The maps describe how the arrangement of the particular school
library
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has changed over 5 years.
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,
this
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library
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has undergone a number of dramatic alterations, the most important of which are the rearrangement of some functional rooms and the expansion of private studying tables to cater for students' needs.
It is clear that
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the layout of
this
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library
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has seen no change in the area of bookshelves which has been located in the north.
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, one of
bookshelves
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which has been located in the south of
this
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layout has been transformed into
the
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desk for student laptops.
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, the desk for computers located on the right side
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has been replaced by the desks for students' laptops. A similar transformation can be seen in the east-southern corner, with the
library
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office having been substituted by the conference room. Two tables have been added in the centre of
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, making the private learning area bigger than that of 5 years ago. On the left side of the
library
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, the borrowing and returning room has been divided into two distinct rooms,
while
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the classroom located adjoining it has been changed into the recording studio.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words library with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "changed" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "tables" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "changed" was used 3 times.
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