The table below shows the percentage of the population by age groups in one town who rode bicycles in 2011

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the people who rode bicycles in a particular city in

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2012. In overview, many women were riding for the whole year as compared to men

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all ages in 2012.

To begin

with, girls up to the

age

of 9

years

, were cyclists with a percentage of 52.5 and a slight difference of 1.3% was experienced because boys were 51.2 per cent.

Furthermore

, more

females

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teenagers ride bikes than males from the

age

of 10 to 19

years

,

this

is clearly shown with 43.6% and 25.1% respectively. Moreso, another

age

group to consider, both women and men at the

age

of twenty to thirty-nine were only 10.8 per cent of male adults and 18.2 female adults who rode bicycles.

Moreover

, during the period of 40-49

years

, a sharp decrease occurred

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hitting the lowest percentage of 13.7 and 9.3 for ladies and gents respectively.

Lastly

. 60

years

and above, there were many females who still have more energy to ride in comparison to males with 19.8% as to 14.6%.

Hence

,

this

is clear that

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a large population of women were riders and a

fewer

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number of men in each and every

age

proportion.