The first graph displays which electrical appliances owned the most by a household, while, others illustrates how many hours of housework consumed per week in one country from 1920 to 2019.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The first graph displays which electrical appliances owned the most by a household, while, others illustrates how many hours of housework consumed per week in one country from 1920 to 2019.
The first graph displays which electrical appliances
owned
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are owned
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the most by a household,
while
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others
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the others
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illustrates
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how many hours of housework
consumed
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were consumed
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per week in one country from 1920 to 2019.
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