The table and charts below give information on the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in one area of Britain. The table shows where the money come from and the charts show how it was distributed. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The table illustrates the sources of the policing fund in a specific region of Britain for the years 2017 and 2018,
while
the pie charts depict the proportion of budget
spending in three different categories. The budget
was measured in million
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millions
pounds
, with spending presented as a percentage.
In brief, a considerable increase in the total Change preposition
of pounds
police
financial plan was noticeable, with only a slight change observed in the budget
spending proportion. Moreover
, over the period, the national government was the largest source of police
financing, and the budget
was primarily allocated to salaries.
In 2017, 304.7 was allocated for the
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apply
police
financing with the majority coming from the national government (175.5) and local taxes (91.2). In the following year, these figures rose significantly to 177.8 and 102.3, contributing to the total fund of 318.6, respectively. Meanwhile, a minor change was witnessed in other sources, with a 0.5 increase within a year, contributing to 38.5 of the total budget
.
Subsequently
, in
the beginning of the period, a vast majority of Change the preposition
at
police
spending went towards salaries, with buildings and transport at 17% and technology at 8%. Although
salaries remained the largest portion in
Change preposition
of
the
Correct article usage
apply
police
spending, this
figure dropped markedly to just under seven in ten by the end of the period. Conversely
, technology marked a notable growth by
6%, comprising 14% of the total spending, Change preposition
of
while
buildings and transport remained steady at 17%.Submitted by e.warikar on
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