The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
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The given bar graph illustrates the outcome of shopping and consuming
coffee
and tea
in five Australian urban cities
. Here If we looked for a glance , we can see that most people
went to a cafe
for coffee
or tea
in last
4 weeks. As for every Correct article usage
the last
city
we can see that most Add a comma
city,
people
are going to cafe
shop
for their Fix the agreement mistake
shops
coffee
or tea
except Adelaide
where a little most Change preposition
in Adelaide
people
buy instant coffee
which is 50 percent in last
4 weeks. Correct article usage
the last
On the other hand
, people
of
the other four Change preposition
from
cities
Sydney, Brisbane, and Hobart all went to cafe
and their percentage is over 60%, though Brisbane\'s Fix the agreement mistake
cafes
people
also
went to cafe
but their percentage is 56%. Fix the agreement mistake
cafes
Moreover
we can see that buying instant Add a comma
Moreover,
coffee
is the second most popular in other all countries where Brisbane is 53%, Hobart was a little more that
Brisbane which is 54%, And others usage is below 50%. Though the buying of fresh Correct word choice
than
coffee
in last
four weeks is low in all Correct article usage
the last
cities
but
in all of them the Remove the conjunction
apply
people
of sydney
buy 44% , Melbourn 42%, and others are below 40%. Change the capitalization
Sydney
At
Rephrase
Lastly
last
, it is clear that
people
of
all those Change preposition
from
cities
spend their
most money Correct pronoun usage
apply
in
going Change preposition
apply
in
a Change preposition
to
cafe
and buy
Wrong verb form
buying
coffee
or tea
where people
of Melbourne is
the majority, and buying Correct subject-verb agreement
are
of
fresh Change preposition
apply
coffee
is the lowest in all cities
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