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The chart below shows what Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after five years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.

The chart below shows what Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after five years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.
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The pie chart shows data about
anthropology
alumni
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alumni's
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career
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careers
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 after
graduates
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graduating
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 from one university, and the table displays
range
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the range
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salaries
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of salaries
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 of
anthropology
graduates
 in some sectors.
Overall
, most
of
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apply
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anthropology
graduates
taking
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take
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 full-time
work
 after finishing their
study
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studies
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while
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the goverment
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goverment
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government
 sector offers the highest rate of salary
form
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for
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 them. Based on the pie chart, the most popular destinations for
anthropology
graduates
 were full-time
work
 with 52%, followed by part-time
work
 at 15% and unemployed at 12%.
In contrast
, full-time postgrad study at 8% and
part time
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part-time
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work
 + postgrad study at 5% were the least options opted by the alumni.
According to
 the table, there are various
income
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incomes
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 of
anthropogy
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anthropology
graduates
depend
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depending
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 on their type of employment.
For instance
, 50%
people
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of people
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 working in
government
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the government
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 sector
earns
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earn
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 more than 100.000
while
 only 30% of private
companies
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companies'
company's
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 employee could reach the same level.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words anthropology, graduates, work with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "shows" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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