Some people believe that it is wrong to keep animals in zoos, while others think that zoos are both entertaining and ecologically important. Discuss both views

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days, a lot of

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are in danger of

extinction

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, and governments should take

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useful action towards that. Nowadays we have

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to keep some

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for

entertaining

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aims and

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take

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of some unique

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of

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, and some people say that we shouldn't use

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as a hobby and

earning

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money for

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, but on the other

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, other folks have different thought about

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, they

believes

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that we should have

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entertaining side too, to can earn enough money to keep and

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better to

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, and I personally believe if we spend

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income for

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it will be a positive attitude. Some individuals disagree

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keeping

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in

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,

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because they believe that

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set

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up just for

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reasons and

earning

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to earn

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money for

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owners. They say we should give freedom to all

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of

animals

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and they should live in

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nature

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, not in

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zoos

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, elephants and turtles or even lions should be in

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nature

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. To be honest, I

am disagree

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with these

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of opinions, because for some kinds of

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, being in

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is

more

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safer than

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nature

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. On the other

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, some folks believe that having

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are vital and essential for

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and

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it ecologically important to them, because unfortunately some

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of

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danger of

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and we should keep some of them

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and take

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of them and

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scientists should have some investigation about their environments and causes of

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opinion, these days ,

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are more important than before and they should

look

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after by the governments and

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people.

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, some kinds of Iranian tigers are in danger of

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and

actually

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we should leave them alone in jungles and

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and we can get some

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from

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. All in all, in my point of view, the most vital reason for having

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is

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animals

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distinctions and we should take more

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of them in

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people don't need to be upset

for

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about

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keeping

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in

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,

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if the

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capital, spend for

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and

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' costs, it will we reasonable to have even more

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.