The graph below gives information about the percentage of the population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040.
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about
the fluctuations of the urban Change preposition
of
population
in four Southeast Asian countries
between 1970 and 2040.
Overall
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while
the percentage
of Philippines' city
residents had witnessed small
fluctuation before 2010.
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the urban
population
in Malaysia
and Indonesia
grew rapidly between 1970 and 2020, and it is projected to grow steadily until 2040. In 1970, Malaysia
had 30% of people live
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whereas
Indonesia
had only 13% of population
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countries
(Malaysia
and Indonesia
) increased sharply to reach 74% and just over 50% respectively until 2020, when Malaysia
became the nation had
largest Change preposition
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residents following
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followed
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one India
Indonesia
. Furthermore
, this
trend pattern is predicted to continue until 2040, by then
, the proportion of Malaysia
will reach over 80% and that of Indonesia
will reach just above 60%.
The trend of the percentage
of the
urban residents in Thailand and Correct article usage
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the Philipphines
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,
illustrates relatively slower growth between 1970 and 2040 with Remove the comma
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small
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population
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and
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until
2040. The ratio of Change preposition
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city
population
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