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the chart below shows the percentage of household in owned and rented accomodation in Enhland and Wales between 1918 and 2011

the chart below shows the percentage of household in owned and rented accomodation in Enhland and Wales between 1918 and 2011
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 compares and contrasts the
percentage
 of two types
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of accomodation
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accomodation
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accommodation
 which are owned and rented in England and Wales from 1918 and 2011.
Overall
,
while
 the
percentage
 of
households
 in owned
accommodation
 had increased
fluctuatelly
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fluctuate
, the
percentage
 of
households
 in rented
accommodation
 had declined
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of
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 two years during
this
 period. In 1918, there was a huge difference between
households
in
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owned and rented,
while
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percentage
 of rented
approximately
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 75%, the
percentage
 of owned
just
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 about 25%.
Then
 coming to 1939 and 1953 which had nearly the same
percentage
 ,
this
 interval
was diminish
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,
rented
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 rate became almost 70% and
owned
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the owned
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 rate
icreased
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increased
 to
approximate
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 30%. The differences
of
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percentage
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continiued
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continued
closed
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, in 1971, it equated
at
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 50%.
After
this
 time,
while
 the
percentage
 of
households
 in owned
accommodation
 increased to 60%,
rented
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 house rate fell to 40%. The
percentage
 of
households
 in rented
accommodation
 remained the same
percentage
 which was at about 30% in 1991 and 2001 but
then
 it increased slightly to 40% in 2011. The
percentage
 of
households
 in owned
accommodation
 was almost 60% in 2011.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words percentage, households, accommodation with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "percentage" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "difference" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 11 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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