the chart below shows the percentage of household in owned and rented accomodation in Enhland and Wales between 1918 and 2011
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compares and contrasts the Correct your spelling
chart
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of accomodation
accomodation
which are owned and rented in England and Wales from 1918 and 2011. Correct your spelling
accommodation
Overall
, while
the percentage
of households
in owned accommodation
had increased fluctuatelly
, the Correct your spelling
fluctuate
percentage
of households
in rented accommodation
had declined exception
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for
this
period.
In 1918, there was a huge difference between households
in
owned and rented, Change preposition
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while
the percentage
of rented approximately
75%, the Add a missing verb
was approximately
percentage
of owned just
about 25%. Add a missing verb
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Then
coming to 1939 and 1953 which had nearly the same percentage
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interval was diminish
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rented
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the rented
owned
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the owned
icreased
to Correct your spelling
increased
approximate
30%. The differences Change the word
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of
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in
percentage
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percentages
continiued
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continued
closed
, in 1971, it equated Change the verb form
to close
at
50%.
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to
After
this
time, while
the percentage
of households
in owned accommodation
increased to 60%, rented
house rate fell to 40%. The Correct article usage
the rented
percentage
of households
in rented accommodation
remained the same percentage
which was at about 30% in 1991 and 2001 but then
it increased slightly to 40% in 2011. The percentage
of households
in owned accommodation
was almost 60% in 2011.Submitted by ilknurkaradmn on
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