The chart below gives information about how families in one country spent their weekly income in 1968 and in 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given bar chart illustrates the average weekly consumption structure
from
families Change preposition
of
in
particular
country in 1968 and Add an article
the particular
a particular
in
2018.
In Change preposition
apply
generally
, the graph shows that the proportion on spending of food, housing, and leisure were Change the word
general
top
three of Correct article usage
the top
households
Change noun form
households'
household's
cost
. Especially, Correct subject-verb agreement
costs
family
spent much more money on food in 1968.
Compared with the other two highest Fix the agreement mistake
families
spenditure
of family, the figure Correct your spelling
expenditure
of
food was distinguished in 1968, Change preposition
for
was
30% of weekly income, Correct pronoun usage
which was
while
the
transportation was 10% and Correct article usage
apply
the
leisure was around 8%. It is obvious that the data Correct article usage
apply
of
fuel Change preposition
for
and
power and personal goods spending were very low in both two years, and they all never Correct word choice
apply
overtake
10% in both years and they were less than 5% in 2018. The weekly cost of house goods Wrong verb form
overtook
in contrast
by
other consumed item Change preposition
to
were
very special, those Change the verb form
was
percentage
were the same in 1968 and 2018 with approximately 7%.Change the determiner
percentages
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