As the demand for oil and gas continues to rise, there is a growing need to explore these energy sources in remote locations. Do you believe the benefits of exploiting these areas outweigh the drawbacks of causing environmental damage?

It is argued that more remote areas should be exploited for exploring deposit of oil and gas as the demand

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these energy sources

grow

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constantly.

Although

the exploration can be done easily as the

locations

are not developed yet, I believe that the drawback of

destorying

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destroying

natural

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habitat of wildlife

animals

outweighes

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outweigh

the benefit. On the one hand, most rural areas are undeveloped,

therefore

it is easier to exploit those

locations

for energy sources. Many mining companies choose remote

locations

to dig in not only because there are higher chance

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having oil and gas

deposit

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, but

also

because it does not affect anyone as no people are living there. Most of the time developing these

area

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areas

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does not conflict with the existing city development plans, so it is much easier to do

large scale

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excavation there.

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, not

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tidy-up jobs are needed after the exploration,

further

reducing the cost needed for the exploration.

However

,

although

people are not affected by the exploitation, there are detrimental effects on the lives of local wildlife

animals

.

Due to

the

absent

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of human intervention a wide diversity of species can be observed in those remote areas. But if their natural habitats are disturbed by the introduction of digging machines, the

animals

will lose their homes and even face extinction.

For instance

, research has found that African lions lose their place to hunt and live

due to

the air and water pollution caused by exploitation activities .

As a result

, they are now listed as endangered species. In conclusion, it is my belief that the benefit of easier exploitation in remote

locations

does not outweigh the devastating effects on wildlife

animals

.