The graphs show figures relating to hours worked and stress levels amongst professionals in eight groups. Describe the information shown to a university or college lecturer. Write at least 150
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The bar chart illustrates
average
number of working Change the article
an average
the average
hours
in a week
divided by eight groups of job
, Fix the agreement mistake
jobs
while
the pie chart depicts the stress
level between the professionals.
Overall
, it is clear that
entrepreneur has the highest number of working hours
in a week
, whereas
lecturers has
the least. Change the verb form
have
However
, in terms of stress
level, lectures
Correct your spelling
lecturers
is
the most who Change the verb form
are
has
experienced Correct subject-verb agreement
have
stress
in their job, while
programmers has
merely tension.
In terms of working time, Change the verb form
have
businessman
spend almost 75 Fix the agreement mistake
businessmen
hours
in a week
, followed by movie producers with just over 50 hours
and doctors had
approximately 50 Wrong verb form
have
hours
. Moreover
, authors consume more than 25 hours
which are
higher than software engineers, lawyers, and Chefs. Lecturers, Correct subject-verb agreement
is
as
the least, accounted for under 25 Change preposition
at
hours
for working
in a Change preposition
of work
week
.
In contrast
, lecturers are experiencing more stress
in their employment (25%) even though their working hours
is
Correct subject-verb agreement
are
minimum
compared to other occupations. Correct word choice
minimal
Next,
movie producers as
the second position with 25%, followed by doctors, executives, and chefs with 15%, 11%, and 10%, respectively. Change preposition
in
However
, lawyers and writers have the same rates, and programmers has
only 5%.Change the verb form
have
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Vocabulary: Replace the words hours, week, stress with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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