The diagrams below give information about two road tunnels in two Australian cities. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The given maps illustrate two different underground
tunnel
systems for cars in two Australian cities.
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Overall
, there are a number of differences between the two Linking Words
tunnel
systems, in terms of the Use synonyms
cost
, size, length, time of construction, and the surrounding environment. The Use synonyms
first
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tunnel
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cost
approximately half as much as the Use synonyms
second
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tunnel
to construct, Use synonyms
however
, the Linking Words
first
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tunnel
was significantly smaller in terms of length and vehicle capacity. The Use synonyms
first
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tunnel
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also
took much longer to construct.
The Linking Words
first
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tunnel
, which took twelve years to construct between 1986 and 1998, Use synonyms
cost
555 million dollarsUse synonyms
,
and was built underneath a body of water and sand. Meanwhile, the Remove the comma
apply
second
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tunnel
only took four years Use synonyms
for
Change preposition
to
completion
but Replace the word
complete
cost
twice as much, at 1,1 billion dollars, and was constructed beneath a layer of stone and clay.
The size of the tunnels was Use synonyms
also
substantially different, with the Linking Words
first
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tunnel
being 1.5 meters high and 2.2 kilometres long, and the Use synonyms
second
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tunnel
being 2.5 meters high and 3.6 k kilometres long. The Use synonyms
first
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tunnel
system is four lanes wide, Use synonyms
while
the Linking Words
second
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tunnel
system is six lanes wide.Use synonyms
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words tunnel, cost, first, second with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "give" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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