The diagrams below give information about two road tunnels in two Australian cities. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The given maps illustrate two different underground
tunnel
systems for cars in two Australian cities.
Overall
, there are a number of differences between the two tunnel
systems, in terms of the cost
, size, length, time of construction, and the surrounding environment. The first
tunnel
cost
approximately half as much as the second
tunnel
to construct, however
, the first
tunnel
was significantly smaller in terms of length and vehicle capacity. The first
tunnel
also
took much longer to construct.
The first
tunnel
, which took twelve years to construct between 1986 and 1998, cost
555 million dollars,
and was built underneath a body of water and sand. Meanwhile, the Remove the comma
apply
second
tunnel
only took four years for
Change preposition
to
completion
but Replace the word
complete
cost
twice as much, at 1,1 billion dollars, and was constructed beneath a layer of stone and clay.
The size of the tunnels was also
substantially different, with the first
tunnel
being 1.5 meters high and 2.2 kilometres long, and the second
tunnel
being 2.5 meters high and 3.6 k kilometres long. The first
tunnel
system is four lanes wide, while
the second
tunnel
system is six lanes wide.Submitted by phuongdong.nguyentran on
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