Your friends recently moved to a new city. You will also be moving to the same city. Write a letter to your friends and include: - Ask where to find a place to live - Tell them what type of place you’re looking for - Share some fun things you would like to do when you get there
Dear Sandeep,
Hope
you are doing well, I got to know, you
have relocated to Mumbai. Correct word choice
that you
Hope
you have settled down now. You might fell
excited to know that I am Correct your spelling
feel
also
moving to the same city next month.
It would be very helpful if you could help me with finding the
home to stay. Correct article usage
a
Moreover
,It would be helpful if you find me the agents or online websites where I can search for properties to stay.
It will be a good option for me if I can rent a property near to shopping mall, play areas and more importantly, if there are Rephrase
in.
school
within 500 meters. Fix the agreement mistake
schools
Finally
Add a comma
Finally,
some where
near to your place, so that we can meet during weekends or during leisure time.
Join the words
somewhere
Hope
you remember the fun we had during our college days, Correct word choice
when
where
we used to play Correct word choice
when
multi player
LAN connected computer games and watch movies together on my laptop. On recalling our college day memories, I am very Correct your spelling
multiplayer
exited
to meet you once again. Correct your spelling
excited
Hope
you are feeling the same.
Yours Lovingly
RajeshSubmitted by kishna.238 on
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coherence cohesion
Ensure that each paragraph presents a clear main idea and that subsequent sentences within the paragraph support that idea effectively. Avoid mixing multiple ideas in a single paragraph.
coherence cohesion
The greeting and closing of the letter are appropriate and polite, reflecting suitable letter-writing conventions.
task achievement
To improve task response, fully address each bullet point from the prompt. Make sure that your requests and descriptions are developed sufficiently and are relevant to the questions.
task achievement
Maintain a consistent and suitable tone throughout the letter. The tone should be appropriate for the relationship with the recipient and the context of the letter. Adjust your tone to be more formal or informal depending on the recipient and your relationship with them.
The Closing
The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.
Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.
Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)
- Yours faithfully,
Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)
- Yours sincerely,
Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)
- Best regards,
- Warm wishes,