the graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular caribbean island between 2010 and 2017. summarize the information and make a comparison. write at least 150 words.

the graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular caribbean island between 2010 and 2017. summarize the information and make a comparison. write at least 150 words.
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The graph highlights how many tourists visited a particular Caribbean
island
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from 2010 to 2017.
Overall
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, it is clear from the graph that
visitors
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staying on cruise ships increased significantly and passed the
number
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of
visitors
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staying on the
island
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in 2016. Total
number
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of
visitors
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increased considerably. At the beginning of the period,
visitors
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staying on the
island
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was around 0.25
million
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.
This
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number
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reached 0.50
million
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both in 2011 and 2013 only with a small dip in 2012. Starting from 2013, the
number
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increased gradually and passed the
number
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of
visitors
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staying on the
island
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in 2016 with 1.5
million
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.
Then
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it reached 2
million
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visitors
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at the end
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of the period. Nearly 0.75
million
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visitors
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were staying on the
island
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both in 2010 and 2011.
Then
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this
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number
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rose to nearly 1.25
million
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in 2012 and 1.5
million
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in 2013 where it stayed the same till the end of the period except for a small dip in 2016. The total
number
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of
visitors
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was 1
million
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at the start but
then
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it rose steadily to 1.5
million
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in 2012 and 2.5
million
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in 2014. The
number
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plummeted to 3
million
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in 2017.
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