the graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular caribbean island between 2010 and 2017. summarize the information and make a comparison. write at least 150 words.

the graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular caribbean island between 2010 and 2017. summarize the information and make a comparison. write at least 150 words.
The graph highlights how many tourists visited a particular Caribbean
island
from 2010 to 2017.
Overall
, it is clear from the graph that
visitors
staying on cruise ships increased significantly and passed the
number
of
visitors
staying on the
island
in 2016. Total
number
of
visitors
increased considerably. At the beginning of the period,
visitors
staying on the
island
was around 0.25
million
.
This
number
reached 0.50
million
both in 2011 and 2013 only with a small dip in 2012. Starting from 2013, the
number
increased gradually and passed the
number
of
visitors
staying on the
island
in 2016 with 1.5
million
.
Then
it reached 2
million
visitors
at the end
of the period. Nearly 0.75
million
visitors
were staying on the
island
both in 2010 and 2011.
Then
this
number
rose to nearly 1.25
million
in 2012 and 1.5
million
in 2013 where it stayed the same till the end of the period except for a small dip in 2016. The total
number
of
visitors
was 1
million
at the start but
then
it rose steadily to 1.5
million
in 2012 and 2.5
million
in 2014. The
number
plummeted to 3
million
in 2017.
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