The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade*-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries.

The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade*-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries.
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The tables compare Fairtrade-labelled
coffee
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and
bananas
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sales
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(in millions of Euros) across five different countries in Europe for the years 1999 and 2004.
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,
sales
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data for both
coffee
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and
bananas
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indicates an increase in almost all the nations. Profit-making of
coffee
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increased most and least in the
UK
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and Denmark, respectively,
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the rate of change in Fairtrade banana wholesale was the highest in Denmark during
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time. The first table shows the highest number of
coffee
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sales
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in Switzerland, which was exactly 3m in 1999. The
sales
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in the
UK
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were half of that, and the lowest
sales
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were recorded in Sweden, with less than 1m. After five years, the
coffee
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sales
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in these five regions went up with a remarkable improvement in the
UK
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. The
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rose significantly to 20m in 2004, which was almost double the total profits in the remaining four nations. The second table displays the
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of
bananas
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. In general, Switzerland had the highest income from
bananas
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in both 1994 and 2014.
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, banana monetary climbed in three states - the
UK
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, Switzerland, and Denmark - between the two years.
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, the
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of
bananas
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in Belgium and Sweden declined in 2014 to around 1m over the period.
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words coffee, bananas, sales, uk, m with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "tables" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Fairtrade sales
  • significant growth
  • trends and patterns
  • market expansion
  • sustainable consumption
  • ethical products
  • consumer awareness
  • economic impact
  • percentage increase
  • market share
  • profit margins
  • trade initiatives
  • consumer behavior
  • retail figures
  • economic indicators
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