The chart below shows the changes that took place in three different areas of crime in Panama City from 2010 to 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the changes that took place in three different areas of crime in Panama City from 2010 to 2019.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The lime graph illustrates the changing levels of three different crimes namely 'burglary','car theft' and '
robbery
' in Panama
city
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. The figures are presented for a
period
covering 9 years, starting from 2010 and ending 2019.
Overall
,
it is clear that
the highest crime type was 'burglary',
while
the lowest one was '
robbery
'. Interestingly, '
robbery
' did not change significantly during the whole
period
.
To begin
with 'burglary'
it
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justified
jus
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just
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below 350 in 2010, and it increased substantially within a year and reached about 3700. Despite having a large amount, it decreased dramatically to 1000 in the years between 2011 and 2015. But
then
it did not change noticeably till the end. Regarding, car theft
clarified
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it was
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around 2800 in 2010 and declined to just over 2000 in 2013 and it grew
up
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slightly until the given
period
is
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was
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over.
Lastly
, to look at '
robbery
' it was unseen and amongst 500 and 1000 during the whole
period
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Crime rates
  • Fluctuated
  • Significant spike
  • Consistent trend
  • Prevalent
  • Cumulative change
  • Enforcement
  • Correlate
  • Reduction/increase in crime
  • Categories of crime
  • Level of crime
  • Period of time
  • Analysis
  • Data representation
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