The chart below gives information about trends in internet used by females in the USA in 2 years

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The provided bar chart illustrates the proportion of female internet users in the USA from 1998 to 2000.

Firstly

,it is immediately noticeable that a great number of young women aged 16 to 30 spend their time online and accounted for 53 , 45 and 44 per cent in 1998, 1999 and 2000 respectively. The internet was

also

popular among the 31 to 50-year-old generation, the proportion of female screen users made up nearly one-fourth during the 3-year period.

Secondly

, children aged less than 15 years old use the internet only a tiny portion, and

this

indicator goes up slowly every year. In 1999 the percentage of the youngest and older generation was equal to 8 per cent and was almost the same in 1998 and 2000. Looking from an

overall

perspective,

it is clear that

the rate increased slightly in 2 years and the younger use screens more than the older.

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