The line graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices of three metals during 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph provides information about the monthly
percentage
of change
in prices of copper, nickel
, and zinc
in 2014. Overall
, in the first
half of the year
, all three metals have been declining with Nickel
, which comes first
in the first
month, experienced
a significant drop. In the second half of the Wrong verb form
experiencing
year
, it rose gradually with Zinc
comes
Wrong verb form
coming
first
in
the end of the Change the preposition
at
year
.
Initially
, the percentage
change
of Nickel
is the highest (6%) compared to Copper (2%) and Zinc
(1%). However
, in the first
quarter of the year
, the percentage
change
sharply fell to 1% and in the next 3 months reached its lowest point with -3%. The other two metals also
reached a number below 0% in June 2014.
In the second half of the year
, the percentage
change
of the three metals started to rise slightly from their lowest point. Zinc
increased 1% from its beginning and finished with 2%. In contrast
, Copper and Nickel
finish with decrease
of 0.5% and 5%, significantly, from their initial prices.Fix the agreement mistake
decreases
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Vocabulary: Replace the words percentage, change, nickel, zinc, first, year with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "significant" was used 2 times.
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