The line graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices of three metals during 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph provides information about the monthly
percentage
of Use synonyms
change
in prices of copper, Use synonyms
nickel
, and Use synonyms
zinc
in 2014. Use synonyms
Overall
, in the Linking Words
first
half of the Use synonyms
year
, all three metals have been declining with Use synonyms
Nickel
, which comes Use synonyms
first
in the Use synonyms
first
month, Use synonyms
experienced
a significant drop. In the second half of the Wrong verb form
experiencing
year
, it rose gradually with Use synonyms
Zinc
Use synonyms
comes
Wrong verb form
coming
first
Use synonyms
in
the end of the Change the preposition
at
year
.
Use synonyms
Initially
, the Linking Words
percentage
Use synonyms
change
of Use synonyms
Nickel
is the highest (6%) compared to Copper (2%) and Use synonyms
Zinc
(1%). Use synonyms
However
, in the Linking Words
first
quarter of the Use synonyms
year
, the Use synonyms
percentage
Use synonyms
change
sharply fell to 1% and in the next 3 months reached its lowest point with -3%. The other two metals Use synonyms
also
reached a number below 0% in June 2014.
In the second half of the Linking Words
year
, the Use synonyms
percentage
Use synonyms
change
of the three metals started to rise slightly from their lowest point. Use synonyms
Zinc
increased 1% from its beginning and finished with 2%. Use synonyms
In contrast
, Copper and Linking Words
Nickel
finish with Use synonyms
decrease
of 0.5% and 5%, significantly, from their initial prices.Fix the agreement mistake
decreases
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Vocabulary: Replace the words percentage, change, nickel, zinc, first, year with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "significant" was used 2 times.
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