You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The graph below gives information about the percentage of the population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The graph below gives information about the percentage of the population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.
The graph shows how the
population
living in cities of four Asian countries changed between 1970 and 2020 years. It
also
shows predictions for feature ages 2030 and 2040.
Overall
, it's evidence that the percentage of people living in cities has an upward trend over taken period of time. And depending on predictions it will continue growing. Indonesia had the lowest city
population
in the
year
1970, about 15%, but took second place in the
year
2020 with a little over 50%. In the
year
2000, it already had the same numbers as Thailand and
then
grew enormously to 50% in 2020, overtaking the Philippines too.
Philippines
Correct article usage
The Philippines
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and Malaysia were close to each other, at
first,
but
then
Malasia
Correct your spelling
Malaysia
cities'
population
pumped to over 70% in the
year
2020, and as prediction says it will be on top with over 80% in 2040. By the way, only the Philippines showed a decrease in the city
population
in the ages between 1990 and 2010.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words population, year with synonyms.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Urban population
  • Trend analysis
  • Urbanization rate
  • Economic development
  • Rural-urban migration
  • Infrastructure
  • Socio-economic events
  • Stagnation
  • Anomalies
  • Environmental concerns
  • Predictive analysis
  • Geographical aspects
  • Government policies
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