The line graph illustrates the proportion of tourists to England who attended four different attractions in Brighton.

The line graph compares and contrasts the

percentage

of

tourists

to England who visited

Bringhton

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Brighton

attaractions

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attractions

between 1980 and 2010.

Overall

,

while

preference

of

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pavilion

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pavilions

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and

pier

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piers

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increased slightly, the

percentage

of

tourists

who

prefered

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preferred

to visit art

gallery

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galleries

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declined during

this

period. The

less

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interest among these four attractions was

pier

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the pier

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in 1980 with 10% and

then

it

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some

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until 2000. It doubled from 2000 to 2010,

the

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portion of visited pier was about 20%. In 1980, the proportion of

tourists

who

attented

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attended

pavilion

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was approximately 25%, it reached the top with almost 50% which was the highest

percentage

of all of them.

However

, it declined to 30% in 2000.

On the other hand

, the proportion of

tourists

who visited

festival

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remained

steadily

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during

this

years

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almost 30%. Whilst the

preferences'

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people who visited art

gallery

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galleries

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was approximately 20%, it increased dramatically

almost

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40% in 1985 and

then

it

halfed

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doubled

again in 1990. Until 2010,

this

percentage

contiuned

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continued

continues

to decline slowly and it was above 10%.