The chart Below gives information about how families in one county spent their weekly income in 1968 and 2018.
The picture expresses the average weekly spending by families in the given years in one given country.
The
figure
for food accounted for 35% in 1968. It had a great decrease of 17% between 1968 and 2018. By contrast
, people
spent 10% income on housing. It and the percentage of clothing and footware
were the same in 1968. In 2018, it increased to 18%. Interestingly, The percentage of household goods did not change in the given years.
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footwear
People
spent 8% income on personal goods in 1968 and the figure
went down to 4% in 2008. Lesisure
accounted for 9% in 1968 and the Correct your spelling
Leisure
figure
raised to 22% in 2018. People
spent 7% income on transport in 1968. By contrast
, it increased to 14% in 2018.
Overall
, people
spent the most money in
food in 1968. Change preposition
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However
, the figure
for leisure was the highest in 2018.Submitted by pobbywang on
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