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In some places, young people find it difficult to communicate with older people. Why is this? What are the solutions? .

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As the living style has changed, it affects the way that young
people
 communicate with
olderly
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elderly
older
. There are three main reasons why it is hard for
children
 to contact with older
people
. First of all,
children
has
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a
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apply
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few
chance
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chances
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 to meet older
people
. Nowadays, the family
becomes
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 smaller than
the
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 past.
Couple
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 do not stay with
the
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their parents, so their
children
 do not have a chance to contact
with
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their
grand parents
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grandparents
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. So, they do not know how to talk or how to communicate with the
elders
.
As a result
, they become
to
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not
familia
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familiar
 and do not have communication skills when they have to communicate with the
elders
.
Second,
the
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older
people
 and young
people
has
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have
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different
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a different
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 kind of interest. So, it is not easy for
children
 to talk with the
elders
 because they do not know
topics
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the topics
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 to talk
.
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about.
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 It makes their
converstation
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conversation
 become
silence
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.
Third,
they have different life
experience
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experiences
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. It makes them do not understand to each other. Sometimes, the
elders
 disagree
to
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with
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 what the younger
people
 do or think and they ask the
children
stop
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to stop
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 doing it, but
they
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the
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children
 do not obey.
Then
 they argue
to
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with
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 each other. The best solution is that the
elder
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elderly
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 and
children
 should open their
mind
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minds
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 and listen to each other.
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