Details of politicians’ private lives should not be published in newspapers. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

These days, an increasing number of reporters are interested in sharing personal pictures of

politicians

' private

life

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in order to be noticed and get paid for it. I truly believe, that these actions need to be punished and prohibited as they disturb the

lives

of people from the government.

To begin

with, information regarding

politicians

' personal

lives

should not be shared in print media, because it can be harmful to their family members who do not even

related

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to

this

news. Revealing these details

cause

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expose

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them to unwanted negative comments and criticism, especially if the shared pictures or news are controversial.

Hence

, many famous political leaders have to hide their family background and the names of their relatives.

For example

,

due to

the issue of corruption in Russia, many scandal journalists chase innocent family members of the person who was involved

into

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corrupt illegal actions.

Additionally

, posting personal information without

a

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permission should be considered as breaking the law and be punished. If paparazzi, who are hired to invade properties belonging to

politicians

, will be punished in

form

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of money,

this

will prevent some of them from participating in illegal actions.

For instance

, in Australia, it happens extremely

rare

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when reporters reveal unwilling information, because of the high value of human rights and regulations.

Moreover

, if extra employees are hired

for searching

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for these reporters

as well as

protecting

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privacy

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of political leaders,

this

will help to reduce the rates of unwanted news. In conclusion,

private

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lives

of

the

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politicians

should stay secret, to protect relatives. In my opinion, it is essential to establish high fines for those who disturb

politicians

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politicians'

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lives

by crossing their boundaries and provide strict policies to mitigate

this

issue.