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The graph gives information about the consumption of fast food (in grams per week), in the UK from 1970 to 1990.

The graph gives information about the consumption of fast food (in grams per week), in the UK from 1970 to 1990.
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The line graph illustrates the weekly amount of fast food which was consumed, in Great Britain between 1970 and 1990. Units are measured in
grams
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.
Overall
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, Fish and chips were the most popular fast food choice amongst the residents in the UK as the interest in Pizza went downhill over the years. The figures for Fish and Chips and Hamburger underwent upward trends,
while
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 Pizza experienced a downward trend
on the contrary
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. In 1970, Pizza was highly in demand compared to the other two. It commenced at around 300
grams
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 before gradually declining between 1970 and 1985 to 200
grams
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 and finishing at just above that level in the final year.
Conversely
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, Hamburger was the least preferred in 1970 with the amount of its consumption starting at around 25
grams
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. The figure for Hamburger
subsequently
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 went up steadily from 1970 to 1985 reaching just above 100
grams
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 before seeing a steep rise and peaking at approximately 280
grams
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 in 1990.
On the other hand
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, Fish and chips began at around 80
grams
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 in 1970. The figure grew steadily in a decade to around 150
grams
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 and
finally
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 saw a dramatic surge from 1980 to 1990 culminating at 500
grams
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.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words grams with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trends" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 4 times.
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