You have seen a Tourist Board advert welcoming nominations for a 'Best City/Town Award.' Nominate your home city/town. Write a letter to the Tourist Board. In your letter • nominate your town/city and refer to its location • explain what is special about your city/town • say how winning an award would change your city/town

Dear Sir, I am writing
this
in
regards
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with
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the Tourist
boad
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board
bond
poster that I came across
while
I was going to my place. Through
this
letter
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letter,
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I would like to nominate
Hyderbad
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Hyderabad
for the 'Best Town Award' contest
that is
taking place.I spent most of my childhood in
the
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Hyderbad
,Hyderabad is considered
as
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one of the
metropoliton
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metropolitan
city
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cities
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and it is the capital city of Telangana .
Moreover
,Telangana is an economically
well developed
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state in India.
Hyderbad
stands first in many places
likewise
, it gives shelter to people from different parts of
india
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, apparently from
the
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recent reports
it
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states that over 3/4 of
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Indias,
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Indias
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Indian
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tech companies are located in
Hyderbad
and majorly it contributes 38%
in
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the country's growth. As of now
Hyderbad
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Hyderabad
is
very
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a very
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well know
place
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a place
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in India,
winning
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and winning
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an award will surely fetch
the
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global
recognisation
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recognition
.
This
might help in establishing more international companies in the state. Thank you for considering my request. Yours Sincerely, Vikram Kallem
Submitted by vicky.kallem on

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tone
Ensure that you maintain a formal tone throughout the letter as this is a key requirement for the IELTS GT task 1 writing.
structure
Aim for a clear logical structure with distinct paragraphs introducing the nomination, detailing unique aspects of your city, and the potential benefits of winning the award.
paragraph focus
Each paragraph should focus on a single idea to maintain coherence and cohesion throughout your letter.
convention
Include a proper salutation at the beginning and a formal closing at the end of your letter to meet the conventions of the task.
task completion
Address each bullet point provided in the task with sufficient detail, providing specific examples where possible.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • nomination
  • welcoming
  • geographical
  • historical
  • cultural
  • recreational
  • diversity
  • demographic
  • cuisine
  • community spirit
  • architectural heritage
  • landmarks
  • reputation
  • boost tourism
  • investment
  • adaptive reuse of spaces
  • urban renewal
  • sustainable travel destination
  • flourishing arts scene
  • culinary delights
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