You have seen a Tourist Board advert welcoming nominations for a 'Best City/Town Award.' Nominate your home city/town. Write a letter to the Tourist Board. In your letter • nominate your town/city and refer to its location • explain what is special about your city/town • say how winning an award would change your city/town
Dear Sir,
I am writing
this
in regards
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regard
with
the Tourist Change preposition
to
boad
poster that I came across Correct your spelling
board
bond
while
I was going to my place.
Through this
letter
I would like to nominate Add a comma
letter,
Hyderbad
for the 'Best Town Award' contest Correct your spelling
Hyderabad
that is
taking place.I spent most of my childhood in the
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apply
Hyderbad
,Hyderabad is considered as
one of the Change preposition
apply
metropoliton
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metropolitan
city
and it is the capital city of Telangana .Fix the agreement mistake
cities
Moreover
,Telangana is an economically well developed
state in India.
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well-developed
Hyderbad
stands first in many places likewise
, it gives shelter to people from different parts of india
, apparently from Change the capitalization
India
the
recent reports Correct article usage
apply
it
states that over 3/4 of Correct pronoun usage
apply
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Indias,
Indias
tech companies are located in Correct your spelling
Indian
Hyderbad
and majorly it contributes 38% in
the country's growth.
As of now Change preposition
of
Hyderbad
is Correct your spelling
Hyderabad
very
well know Correct article usage
a very
place
in India,Add an article
a place
the place
winning
an award will surely fetch Correct word choice
and winning
the
global Correct article usage
apply
recognisation
.Correct your spelling
recognition
This
might help in establishing more international companies in the state.
Thank you for considering my request.
Yours Sincerely,
Vikram KallemSubmitted by vicky.kallem on
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tone
Ensure that you maintain a formal tone throughout the letter as this is a key requirement for the IELTS GT task 1 writing.
structure
Aim for a clear logical structure with distinct paragraphs introducing the nomination, detailing unique aspects of your city, and the potential benefits of winning the award.
paragraph focus
Each paragraph should focus on a single idea to maintain coherence and cohesion throughout your letter.
convention
Include a proper salutation at the beginning and a formal closing at the end of your letter to meet the conventions of the task.
task completion
Address each bullet point provided in the task with sufficient detail, providing specific examples where possible.